I altered all the Yarn Overs in the Alpacas at White Horse Farm shawl to Double Yarn Overs.
Altered design with the Double Yarn Overs (minus the beadwork):
Note that the new version was done in a darker yarn. I didn't want to waste anymore of the alpaca wool that will be used to knit the shawl.
You'll have to use your imagination, but suppose the original version has the lace work of the new version. Would it look better?